Indecent: I'd like to put off determining whether it actually is all in her head for just a bit longer. Getting Rito's perspective sounds like a fun way to do that.
Yumiko: We don't really need exposition, do we? We know what kind of situation Yumiko is in, and she's probably seen enough manuscripts that she can wing it. Plus, I want to see how that talking rat deals with getting sidelined in favor of Yumiko's job.
Confused purified former monster sounds like it could be funny too.
Yumiko: Option #4 sounds like fun. Non-evil monster with cut-down powers just trying to survive in this modern world, intercut with exposition by rat creature about the monsters.
Titnosis: #1. Campus is full of blissed-out girls with giant tits.
Akane the Half Alien: I would recommend option 2. They just presume that it’s Happosi and that assumption leaves them entirely vulnerable to the real perpetrator. My idea for this threat is an island spirit or the artificial intelligence of a colonization ship that crashed onto the island that controls the fauna of the island. Either way, it wants the boys and wants the girls out of the way, by the use of magical or bio-engineered plants.
Whether or not you want to take that idea, I also suggest to split them up by gender lines. For the guys, this allows Ataru and Rannma some “male bonding”. I really like the dynamic you made between the two, and want to see that further explored. For the girls, the separation made themselves vulnerable to further alterations of their perception, minds, or even their physical bodies (such as expanding curves, or even something weird like turning into ultra curvy nymphs) and leads to lesbian sexy time.
Shinobu should be the first one to break, believing it to be Lum’s “alien lesbian pheromones”
And Ranma should definitely switch to girl form, and be afflicted as well.
TLR Indecent: I would recommend option 3, but with a catch. What is happing to her is that she is developing Haruhi-esque reality-bending powers fueled by her deeply suppressed libido. The naked vision and warped vocal cognition were just the beginning of her perverted power's awakening. Soon becoming tangible changes to reality that Lala notices, and is affected by.
Whether or not she realizes this, or regardless if she does, her denial only makes it more potent.
Negima Titnosis: Option 1, an entire school of giant titted and tit loving girls. How about Asuna meets up with others that aren’t yet fully under the control of their humongous breast and they make a coalition against the tittypocalypse.
Magical Christmas Cake Yumiko: I agree with both Anons, Deny the cute rat it’s exposition time. And with the purified monster making a new life for itself.
Heck, why not make this how she recruits new members to her magical girl crew. Get them a job and have office antics with monstergirls.
Indecent: You, sir, have an idea I can get behind. "You have to accept this part of yourself! Your denial is only making it stronger!" "That's impossible! I don't have those kinds of feelings and I never will!"
Akane the Half-Alien My idea is that the culprit might be Happosai adjacent: 1) Pantyhose Tarou- this is a plan to lure Happosai with another method to force the perv to change his name. 2) This is Lukkosai- he's creating the ideal scenario to obtain breast prints of several prime targets for his collection (Ranma, Lum, and Sakura) 3) This is a ploy of Copycat Ken to lure his teacher back out for more training.
Magical Christmas Cake Yumiko: I'd go with 4 it's standard to have the big bads at least have a meeting about threats after they appear. Of course it would be ideal to have this and two discussing their ideas about the threat alternating with reality of Yumiko.
Unless you plan to have Yumiko the only Christmas Cake and the rest of the group being girls/young women do I suggest that bartender that seems to know Yumiko so well as a future Magical Christmas Cakes.
Regarding Akane the Half Alien, Tritan actually did an update for one of the options: http://old.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/1413/1413802.html
Indecent:
ReplyDeleteI'd like to put off determining whether it actually is all in her head for just a bit longer. Getting Rito's perspective sounds like a fun way to do that.
Yumiko:
We don't really need exposition, do we? We know what kind of situation Yumiko is in, and she's probably seen enough manuscripts that she can wing it. Plus, I want to see how that talking rat deals with getting sidelined in favor of Yumiko's job.
Confused purified former monster sounds like it could be funny too.
Yumiko: Option #4 sounds like fun. Non-evil monster with cut-down powers just trying to survive in this modern world, intercut with exposition by rat creature about the monsters.
ReplyDeleteTitnosis: #1. Campus is full of blissed-out girls with giant tits.
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Negima Titnois: I second option 1, with the campus being converted while Asuna was out.
ReplyDeleteIndecent: I'm fine with seeing Rito's perspective though I'd prefer if it the alien plot is real (regardless of whether that's revealed now or alter).
Akane the Half Alien: I would recommend option 2. They just presume that it’s Happosi and that assumption leaves them entirely vulnerable to the real perpetrator. My idea for this threat is an island spirit or the artificial intelligence of a colonization ship that crashed onto the island that controls the fauna of the island. Either way, it wants the boys and wants the girls out of the way, by the use of magical or bio-engineered plants.
ReplyDeleteWhether or not you want to take that idea, I also suggest to split them up by gender lines. For the guys, this allows Ataru and Rannma some “male bonding”. I really like the dynamic you made between the two, and want to see that further explored. For the girls, the separation made themselves vulnerable to further alterations of their perception, minds, or even their physical bodies (such as expanding curves, or even something weird like turning into ultra curvy nymphs) and leads to lesbian sexy time.
Shinobu should be the first one to break, believing it to be Lum’s “alien lesbian pheromones”
And Ranma should definitely switch to girl form, and be afflicted as well.
TLR Indecent: I would recommend option 3, but with a catch. What is happing to her is that she is developing Haruhi-esque reality-bending powers fueled by her deeply suppressed libido. The naked vision and warped vocal cognition were just the beginning of her perverted power's awakening. Soon becoming tangible changes to reality that Lala notices, and is affected by.
Whether or not she realizes this, or regardless if she does, her denial only makes it more potent.
Negima Titnosis: Option 1, an entire school of giant titted and tit loving girls. How about Asuna meets up with others that aren’t yet fully under the control of their humongous breast and they make a coalition against the tittypocalypse.
Magical Christmas Cake Yumiko: I agree with both Anons, Deny the cute rat it’s exposition time. And with the purified monster making a new life for itself.
Heck, why not make this how she recruits new members to her magical girl crew. Get them a job and have office antics with monstergirls.
Indecent: You, sir, have an idea I can get behind. "You have to accept this part of yourself! Your denial is only making it stronger!" "That's impossible! I don't have those kinds of feelings and I never will!"
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Akane the Half-Alien
ReplyDeleteMy idea is that the culprit might be Happosai adjacent:
1) Pantyhose Tarou- this is a plan to lure Happosai with another method to force the perv to change his name.
2) This is Lukkosai- he's creating the ideal scenario to obtain breast prints of several prime targets for his collection (Ranma, Lum, and Sakura)
3) This is a ploy of Copycat Ken to lure his teacher back out for more training.
Magical Christmas Cake Yumiko: I'd go with 4 it's standard to have the big bads at least have a meeting about threats after they appear. Of course it would be ideal to have this and two discussing their ideas about the threat alternating with reality of Yumiko.
Yumiko:
ReplyDeleteAgree that we don't need exposition.
Unless you plan to have Yumiko the only Christmas Cake and the rest of the group being girls/young women do I suggest that bartender that seems to know Yumiko so well as a future Magical Christmas Cakes.
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Regarding Akane the Half Alien, Tritan actually did an update for one of the options: http://old.bearchive.com/~addventure/game1/docs/1413/1413802.html
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