Discussion: First Impressions + Akane the Half Alien

Hi, before starting today I wanted to clarify something since it seems that there's some kind of misunderstanding about why I post stories here first before putting them on the addventure.

Basically, I want you guys to be my final eyes on the episode before it goes onto the addventure. Giving me suggestions for what to do in a future update on story posts is pretty pointless because I'll forget all about them by the time I'm writing that thread again. What I really want on story comments is to be given opinions on that episode. Is it a good one? Does it need a rewrite? Any continuity gaffes?

So, please spare any ideas for upcoming episodes for the comments section on the addventure or for these discussion posts. I don't want to discourage making comments on the stories mind, I just want them to be about the episode itself instead of the thread's future direction. That is what I am aiming for, and why I wait at least a week before putting them on the addventure.

Does this make sense? If so, onto discussing this week's winners.


First impressions: When we last left off, Mrs Moroboshi was on her very last nerve with all these weirdos visiting her home. I thought it would be hilarious to basically have her make everyone sit down for breakfast. They behave themselves - until she leaves the room when all hell breaks loose. Then she comes back and everyone instantly is behaving again... Until she has to leave again.

And of course Mr Moroboshi is left in the middle of all the nonsense sighing wearily and going hungry because Rei ate his breakfast.

Akane the Half Alien:Ooh, it's gonna be tough making use of that nicely high level of chaos going on there. Which way to go here! I'm tempted to have fun with the Kuno siblings just to see how their dynamic works. Then again, Shampoo is likely still a-scheming, which should be pretty fun. I can't decide, what do you want to see?