Sorry, minor change of plans. Another vote came in just as I was getting things sorted out here, but I didn't see it until well after making the post. Factoring it in did make a change to the winner this week, but Ring of Truth seems like a shoe-in for next week.
Having said that, funny coincidence: Both of these are threads Bub the Zombie has worked on as well.
NTR 1/2
I think focusing on Akane and Ukyo sounds like a bit of fun here. While it was fun to look in on the other three, that's where the main action is. Or at least they'll be following after the main action. Perhaps Ukyo offers to pretend to be a man so they can pretend to be on a date with each other, concentrating yet more netorare potential in on a single event?
First Impressions(UY):
Let's keep things simple. Okay, so we're copying out the events of the third chapter of the series at this point. I think that Benten should notice that her friends are missing, then we can cut to the two of them being held prisoner against their wills. Let's try to keep this part of the story simple for the time being, then get to Sakura and the twins once this is resolved. How does that sound?
First Impressions: Sounds good to me!
ReplyDeleteNTR 1/2: Yeah I think that's exactly what Ukyo would do.
ReplyDeleteRe: First Impressions: Just a suggestion, and it doesn't necessarily have to be in the next episode, but maybe at some point Ryu might comment on all the pictures of Rei that Ran has in her ship, asking "who is that hunk?" This immediately sparks a jealous fear in Ran that her sister is also interested in Rei, only for Ryu to avail those fears and say that she only commented in a general manner, followed by her revealing that she's engaged to a boy named Nagisa, whom she's never met.