Sunday, 26 April 2015

Discussion: Hentai Crystal + Akane's Titnosis

Confession first of all. I've already written a first draft of Hentai Crystal. I'll probably tweak it over the course of the week. In the meantime though...


Hentai Crystal: In case you wanted to discuss this one still, what I have is basically a continuation of Usagi being given training in the dream. She is persuaded by "Libra" to surrender control of the dream completely to facilitate the training and is then taught both of the techniques. If there's anything you'd like to say about this idea, don't hesitate I may find it useful for a rewrite.

Akane's Titnosis: Couple possibilities here. I do like the idea of Akane accidentally titnotising Ryoga again and giving him the same instructions she gives Kuno. Plenty of fun could be had with that. Not entirely sure what would be the best course yet, but definitely some potential fun to be had.


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