Discussion: Real World Sailor Moon

First, some minor news. I am intending to repost this thread on Adultfanfiction, and have received permission from both Sirocco and Cross C to do so. Before doing this, I intend to go over the work so far and clean it up a bit, but that can be discussed in another post.

For now let us discuss the possible direction for the next episode. I have already asked Sirocco what his intentions for the thread are, and they are posted below.

Also, this is Sirocco's blog if you would like to visit there.

In the Charmed Life episode, the students who bought charms were remotely put under hypnosis, at which point they would board a particular bus which would take them to an outer dimension. There the Negaverse would siphon their energy.

In the modified story, I was picturing something a little more complex. Small groups of students who bought the armbands would be put under hypnosis like before. This time they are instead drawn to doorway in the school that hadn't existed before. It would take them to a separate dimension where a neverending volleyball was taking place, featuring holograms of the school's team lead by Makoto.

The illusions are wearing the armbands and headbands, and otherwise ridiculously erotic uniforms. Not only do they consistently win against their opponents, but they play with each other teasingly to 'congratulate' each other on great plays, all the while flirting with the audience. The real students drawn into the spectator's section are driven to a state of lust-maddened frenzy and begin having wanton sex with whoever is nearest to them, much like in the library.

Meanwhile, Makoto and the other players in the real world wear the headbands and armbands, which allows the illusions to use their forms and sports skills in the other world. However, the feedback from all of the raw sexual energy of the crowd plus the playful interaction on the court between their doppelgangers begins filtering back through the sportswear, and all of the girls find themselves highly aroused by their teammates, and can't understand why it's happening all of a sudden.

I like this plan, so I'm going to use it. I do need to work out a few details here and there, but that should be good enough to work something out of.

I figure, Usagi and Ami try to talk about Makoto in vague terms while Naru starts behaving a little oddly. She excuses herself, allowing the two Scouts to be a little more open in their conversation. Then we see the trap Naru is falling into playing out. After that, the two Scouts could realise something weird was going on while watching a volleyball game, then they somehow manage to break the spell on Makoto and the team. This frees Naru from the illusion, but not from the room itself. Ami works out some way to track them down, and Makoto follows them out of curiousity. She turns into Sailor Jupiter during the resulting fight.

Though a lot of that is probably not gonna be in the next episode, it's good to have a direction to aim for. What do you all think?