We've got a pair this week that I haven't updated for a long, long time and are both fairly fresh threads. Not much in either of them.
Creeping Perversion: Tempted to just go with the "not a date", with Ranma struggling with his newfound perversion. Anything specific you're wanting here?
Normality of Kyon: This could be pretty interesting as the thread is one episode deep. That gives us a pretty deep range of what could happen here. Obviously, Kyon shouldn't work out how the earrings work yet, but that just leads me to ask what sort of shenanigans he'll accidentally cause. Perhaps this is a good time for Haruhi to barge into the room?
Hmmm... this is pretty late, but I guess I can give some suggestions. With Creeping Perversion, how about simply showing him noticing the Girls charm. You started with Akane, now you can go with Ukyo or Shampoo, then when he inevitably tries to run, he notices that the other random Girls on the street also look Kind of attractive.
ReplyDeleteMaybe make him think his Libido has awakened instead of it being "just" Akane.
How about a Scene where Ukyo tries to give him a bento and actually gets embarassed and for the first time he notices that this Kind of Action takes a good deal of Courage? Of course that isn't quite Canon, but it could be used.
About normality of Kyon, I would say the Haruhi appears choice is best for avoiding any discoveries. Kyon is pretty smart and has a great deal of wisdom for the Age of his character, so keeping him off Balance seems reasonable. Maybe make it so Haruhi is searching for the 7 mysteries of the School, or there is some old uninhabited house that is said to be haunted.
That is the type of Thing that I could see her doing. And with Kyon's sarcasm, he can easily say something using the word "normal" at some Point and only notice that something is weird a good bit later.
Actually, I've already written out the both of them. I'm just waiting until they can be checked out before posting. I tend to write on friday unless something unexpected comes up.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, Normality of Kyon basically nails what I do, except Kyon doesn't remark that anything is normal. Though that's likely to come up later.
As for Creeping Perversion, what I had originally written out was the "not a date" thing with Akane which had Ranma suddenly having to deal with a horny girl form lusting after the hot actors in the movie.
Having said that, I also quite like yours. I may do another scene involving your Ukyo suggestion, then go into the date.
I am happy to be of use, even if I am a bit too late.
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