Monday, 9 December 2013

Story: Sailor Succubus: Mistress Saturn or Sailor 9?

Well, I did say I'd delay on this one for about a week to give others the chance to make an addition. Let's see how this one turns out, in your opinions?

The transformation always came with a rush of power as the mundane was changed into something so much more. A force to be reckoned with each in their own right, but, it could be easily argued, none more so than Sailor Saturn. Destructive beyond belief, but then when one is deliberately designing a last-ditch weapon to be utilised as a last resort, it had better damn well be the biggest bang you ever did see!

It felt a little bit different this time. She couldn’t put her finger on it, but this transformation felt… Wonderful. There was usually this sense of trepidation underpinning it all, anxiety over what might happen if she was forced to act. Over what might force her to act at all. Would she lose control over it? Would she destroy something she was not intending? Not so this time. This time, she felt like she was in complete control over all of it. This time, she was confident.

And, she realised when she looked down at herself, tall. Very tall. Goodness, but those legs did rather go on forever, didn’t they? Her hands roamed up towards her chest in disbelief, and she assessed that she was twice as (what was that word they used…) <i>talented</i> as Makoto, and her hair was so long!

“Remarkable!” she exclaimed, examining herself and really liking what she was seeing. “I must look stunning. Simply stunning.”

“Oh, believe me. You do,” the girl pretending to be Chibi-Usa said, with a smile on her face that Saturn couldn’t quite place.

“Well! It goes without saying!” Saturn declared with a hand on her hip. “So. You might as well save us both a little time, if you would not mind. Please, what manner of abilities does this lovely new form grant?”

Chibi-Usa tapped the side of her nose. “You’ll work it out,” she said. “When the time is right. But! Try not to mention anything to the others until then. ’Kay? If they overreact, why… It could be disastrous!”

“I understand completely,” Saturn declared, effortlessly adopting an air of elegance and refinement that was still, in its own way, rather alluring and would have remained so even if she were not wearing little more than a leotard and miniskirt. “You could only come to me for assistance. Very well. I shall behave responsibly and withhold this form from the world until the time is right.”

“That’s the spirit!” Chibi-Usa exlcaimed, suddenly hugging her. “I knew I could rely on you!”

Saturn tried to ignore the feeling of the young woman’s rather large breasts pressing into her own. After all. That would be most unladylike, and if there was anything that Sailor Saturn absolutely was from now on, it would have to be ladylike.

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“Forgive me, my Queen,” her idiot servant began, and she could already finish the sentence before it rolled off his stupid (but skilled due to careful training) tongue. “I fail to see the point in transforming Sailor Saturn into a refined and elegant lady.”

“Only because you are a blithering idiot with no imagination,” the Succubus Queen retorted. “How long have you been my servant now? You should know better! WeSuccubi are more - much, much more - than just giggling bimbos in tiny skirts! Do you have <i>any</i> idea how easy it would be for men to spot us if that’s all we were?!”

“Please, my Queen,” the servant said, dropping to his knees. She kicked him over. “Please teach this humble idiot.”

“It’s not complicated,” the Queen explained, rolling her eyes as she paced around the pathetic little insect. “Different men like different things. So instead of only setting out a spread of chocolate, we put out a couple apples as well. Little bit of chicken, maybe some ice cream or pizza… As an aside, I’m becoming rather hungry and demand you bring me every item of food I just listed and lay them on your stomach while I eat off you.”

“As you command,” the servant said, finding a way to bow even deeper.

“Back to my point, then! Some men don’t want to be chased by girls eager for sex. Some men want to be the chasers. They see a refined and elegant lady with a pretty face and the right curves, that just screams ‘challenge’ at the top of her lungs. It’s the difference between going fishing, and having the salmon leap right into your oven.”

“I think I understand now,” the servant said, though there was a better than average chance that he did not. “Is this her newfound succubus power, then? To entice men with elegance and grace?”

“Pft, hardly! Give her the same ability as Jupiter? Not happening! No, no!” The Queen grinned a manic grin and drummed her fingers on the side of her throne. “That’s just the start of dear, sweet Hotaru’s corruption. Phase one is a resounding success. At any night of my choosing, I can enter her dreams and finish the process, unlocking her <i>real</i> power in a heartbeat. But! That isn’t happening until I have the other three Outers every bit as ready.”


  1. Hotaru changes back to normal, and finds that she’s still in this transformed body!
  2. Hotaru changes back to normal, and notices there’s something a little bit off.
  3. The Succubus Queen makes her move on another Outer.
  4. Meanwhile, what has Usagi’s day been like so far?
  5. In an unrelated event, a different demon attempts an attack in an area the Inners are near.
  6. Something else

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