This story left off right here. I've not actually worked on this storyline yet, so this should be an interesting experience.
I feel it might be interesting to have Lelouch immediately proceed towards Clovis and push the plot forward to the next part where Lelouch is testing out his powers at school. I feel that this would help establish the thread's direction quickly and further establish why things are so different in this telling.
As always, I am eager to hear your thoughts on the thread and whatever ideas you may have regarding the direction it should take. This is especially true for a thread I've not actually worked on before. Please share your thoughts, they may well inspire me towards even more interesting directions.
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