Cocknosis DxD: So, we're at the cusp of the next step of the story, and I think it would be good to take a look at what Kuoh is like now that damage control has been attempted. Maybe a cutaway to Riser to show him and his peerage talking themselves into doing a dumb thing.
Pride and Joy: I think Ryoga should get the joy of all the girls suddenly being all over him, panic, run off, encounter cat-fist girl Ranma - who then aggressively hits on him much to his shock. End the episode with Ranma being shocked out of the cat-fist somehow.
As for NTR 1/2, I'd like to share with you my thought process on it from this week. Please note this comes from a place of amusement more than it does frustration
Me: Alright, time to plan out an end to this thread. I don't really see anywhere else for it to go, anything else that I do at this point would be pretty contrived and pointless padding.
Discussion thread: No please, one more before the finale.
Me: Bwah?
Discussion: I really think this needs something else before the conclusion.
Me: Uh, okay, let me work on that instead I guess? It shouldn't be a problem coming up with something.
Writer's block: 'Sup.
I gotta be honest with you guys, I got nothing on this. I thought about it all week and couldn't come up with anything that I could do here beyond skipping ahead six months to show Kuno enjoying his new harem. It's literally the only thing my brain will let me conceive of writing for this thread.
But I'm not giving up quite yet. I'm going to try until Wednesday to come up with something else, and if I can't... That's what you're getting. Really sorry if that's disappointing, but you try arguing with writer's block. Guy's a brick wall, won't listen to reason.
I want to stress - this is not your fault for suggesting or pushing for that instead. You want what you want, and I am not blaming you for that. It's my fault for letting that become like sand in the gears of my mind. Nobody is to blame for summoning writer's block than my own damn self. Okay?
Well, good luck with that NTR extension. Maybe someone here will chime in with an idea you can use, but I am sorry to report that I will not be that person. If what you post ends up being the end after all, I don't think anyone can really blame you.
ReplyDeletePride: Heh yes, I totally agree, that something could be Ranma's cherry popping on Ryoga's P-chan, or something maybe not quite third base works too.
ReplyDeleteNTR1/2: I'd say write up what you have ideas for maybe something springs to mind? If not I'll go back a read the last few entries and see if I get a picture of what I'd like to see, maybe other's too, who knows I might get more than one idea. I have no problem waiting a little longer for the next entry if a good conclusion piece can come about.
What about Nodoka talking to Ranma about locking his curse, since it's only proper for her Goshujin-sama to have a harem, even with the waning influence of the ring she's got her own loose screws. And since Akane is also part of it, technically they're fulfilling the Tendo/Saotome pledge if not in the original meaning... But they can't have any potential for accidents if Ranma can supply sperm after all...
DeletePerhaps they needed to roll the dice as it were to decide which would be head wife, or perhaps a combination of everyone pushing Ranma forward as best option and her own competitiveness sticking her foot in her mouth with Kuno in earshot?
Another idea is for time-skipped epilogues in that same competitiveness has Ranma playing with ki after feeling a pregger Nodoka/Akane/Ukyo one (or more) was the first one to have a Kuno baby in her. The playing around accidentally makes her carry twins or more, making her have the larger belly satisfying her competitive spirit there, to the consternation of Akane... And maybe some trick of Jusenkyo or the method used to lock her, she ends up the milkiest of the girls, much to her secret joy, since there's no shortage of mouths eager to drink from her? Could even just be the fact that so many drink from her/she enjoys it so much that causes the extra milkiness. Always swooping in to feed any of the young, popping a nipple into any of her lovers' mouths etc...
Perhaps Akane and Kodatchi bond and become friends? Cautious/wary on Akane's end at least. And terrifying for everyone when Kodachi starts to include her during poison making, her cooking methods making her perfect for it, much to her annoyance... And she can gradually improve with constant aid in making regular meals too.
Ukyo and Nodoka I'd see being to cooks, though dragging Ranma into lessons and having her do whole meals for the family. And maybe she even does some without any prompting, while not full on Kasumi, she does give off some of those vibes, especially without needing to be man among men anymore... Maybe Ukyo only has one offspring since she still works her shop and the downtime pregnancy puts on it makes her prefer not to be? I could see Nodoka wanting a couple of her own, Ranma competing (or maybe even liking the feeling of a growing life in her) with her mom/Akane?
Hopefully some of these crack the block...
I never liked the NTR thread tbh, way too dark/bad end for me. Maybe you can find away to end it on a hopeful note & epilogue? Then again that might not be what its proponents are hoping for.
ReplyDeleteNTR 1/2 is one of my favorite threads here, but I'm pretty much satisfied with it as is. If you can come up with some nice little epilogue to cap it, great. If not, it's perfectly understandable.
ReplyDeleteThat said, I don't think you've posted the last NTR 1/2 on this blog on the Beaddventure yet. I think that could be added, if only so that someone else might come up with something to continue it with.
NTR 1/2: Checking back the suggestions on the last update, maybe go with how Kuno now has to deal with being a harem protagonist and go through the shenanigans Ranma used to? If you want to play up the humor, maybe focus on how Kuno isn't a good enough fighter to actually resolve those incidents (and doesn't have the ring tilting reality in his favor) so the harem members have to save themselves, and only put up with this because he's so good in bed.
ReplyDeleteCocknosis DxD: I suggest that the Main players in Kuoh, despite trying to mitigate the damage also do dumb things, Clearly addled to think they put the influence under "manageable" levels.
ReplyDeletePride and Joy: One small suggestion is that Ryoga's terrible sense of direction is what helps him escape. They lose him for a moment as they chase him. Then they follow after where they think he's gone, going down the most logical path someone would take.
NTR 1/2: An epilogue or series of epilogues could be a good way to give it a conclusion. It could also grant some scenes to explore without worrying to much about setup.