Pride and Joy: Methinks it is time to put the Pantyhose Taro arc to bed. Likely with girl form Ranma drooling over Ryoga's Playboy form as well. That is, until Ryoga is able to find some hot water somewhere in some comedic turn or other. Your thoughts?
LS Ranma: Aha, a little embarassing here, but I did something for this thread for a patreon supporter that will be posted here at the end of the month. As it directly follows on from this episode, I'm going to do a brief cutaway to something else - Let's look in on how Nabiki and Kasumi have been impacted by Ranma, and what they are up to while that date is going on.
Friendly Hentai Tome: I am torn between two directions here. Does Akane try to set up a "friends with benefits" harem for herself and Ranma, or do Hiroshi and Daisuke get access to Shampoo and Ukyo instead? Depending on which direction I go for, this next update will have to change quite a bit.
Friendly Hentai Tome: "friends with benefits" harem
ReplyDeletePride and Joy: Hopefully Girl-Form Ranma looses that form's virginity.
Friendly Hentai Tome: I would like to see the bros with Shampoo and Ukyo. Or rather how they don't get pounded into paste by Shampoo for just looking at her.
ReplyDeleteLS Ranma: Fair, lets see some developing siscon from Kasumi.
Pride and Joy: Good plan
Friendly tome: A harem of different girls thanthe usual so that the bros can get some Chinese and Okonomiyaki dishes...
ReplyDeletePride and Joy: Perhaps the hot water hijinks is on both so Ryoga turns to normal, and Ranma-chan turns Ranma-kun in the middle of a bang session? Lukily Ryoga's p-chan happend to slip out of Ranma-chan otherwise there'd have to be invented a response as to what happens when something is inserted itnot slot v that doesn't exist in the other form...
LS Ranma: Let's see how far the subtle lesbianization has gone of the elder sisters...
Honestly, when it comes to Pride and Joy, it's current direction has negatively impacted my enjoyment. I'll be straight up here: I do not like Ryoga, at all. There have been occasional writers who have managed to make him likeable (or at least, less annoying) but the majority of iterations of him make me roll my eyes at the best of times and scroll past him, unless he's part of an important plot point. Giving him a chance with the girls feels wrong to me, like we're moving into a different genre entirely from the wacky comedy porn. All the girls currently with Ranma had some feelings for him in one way or another, which they didn't for Ryoga. It feels like we're moving into NTR story territory here, and you already have NTR 1/2 for that. I don't know, it's just my opinion. Now if Ryoga were to pick up a harem from some of the secondary girls who show up from time to time (Akari, Asuka the white lily, Azusa, Mariko, etc.) I'd probably just go back to not caring about him, wish him well on his journey's and all.
ReplyDeleteAs for LS Ranma, I don't really see an issue with some divergance for the older Tendo sisters, and for Friendly tome, a friends with benefits harem seems best, I like it when Ranma gets at least his main three Fiancée's. Oh also *Friends theme song plays*
I'm sorry you feel that way about P&J. I don't have *much* written for this week yet, so I'll try to make it more wacky comedyesque when I finally get the time to focus on it.
DeleteThat being said... please, please try to make those kind of comments as early in the week as possible. I've actually already written out Friendly Hentai Tome, but I could have just as easily written Pride and Joy already instead. Knowing how readers feel early in the week makes it way easier to course correct.
Fair enough. Honestly I'd visit everyday if it weren't for google search algorithms messing with me all the time. Seriously, I got like ten pages of different webpages mentioning the Ranma episode the story bases it's name off of. This place is bookmarked now though, So I'll be around to see things more often. You are after all, an excellent writer, Even when your writing about Ryoga.
DeleteAlright, then how is this for a more detailed plan?
DeleteGirl and boy form Ranma argue inside Ranma's head for a bit with girl form Ranma being very thirsty for Ryoga, and trying to imply that Ranma's always had a bit of a gay crush on him. Boy form denies that vigorously, and girl form asks if he's being tsundere again like he is with Akane~
Girl form then tries to challenge boy form. Go ahead, give it a try. Give Ryoga a smooch on the lips. If you don't like it, you can just not do that again. If you do like it... Well, there you go! What are you afraid of?
Ranma calls her out on trying that lousy approach, how stupid does she think he is? However, girl form Ranma is too busy daydreaming about the dirty things she wants to do with Ryoga to pay attention anymore. Boy form Ranma tweaks her ears to make her pay attention, and girl form Ranma complains that she has needs too, you know! He's been getting all kinds of ass, but this sexy girl form has got exactly no dick, at all! Well, now Ryoga's gonna get laid, either by her or one of the other girls, so they'd better get their butts in gear...
But then something stirs deep within Ranma's underwear. His. his. His. His, his, his. Those girls are his, and they're making googly eyes at Ryoga? In the real world, Ranma snaps out of it, grabs Akane and smooches the living daylights out of her. Ryoga gets pissed off, so Ranma tells him off for getting that stupid spring water on himself. When Ryoga tries to get Ranma to leave Akane alone, Akane winds up punting him away as Ranma tackles her to the ground.
Ranma then orders the girls to strip down. His girl form has needs too. Cue lesbian orgy.
Meanwhile Ryoga crash lands on Pantyhose Taro, who was trying to make a dignified exit, while also puzzling through what he might try to do the next time he shows up now that he's tried spring water.
That........ is fucking hilarious. And very in vogue with the comedy style this story is rocking. Like, just reading that had me picturing Ryoga hitting Taro headfirst and got me giggling a bit.
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