Sunday, 24 August 2025

Story: Negima Stultus Pulchram Rewrite

 


Alright, this feels like a good opportunity to summarise events so far. Help us keep things in line, keep things straight in our heads so that we're all clear on where we stand. There's a lot of characters here, taking on the stylings of a lot of different kinds of bimbos, so let's break it down nice and simply so we're all on the same page. Alright? Alright! Let's go!


Our story began with Negi leaving campus for a time, which gave Asuna, Haruna, Nodoka and Yui a chance to investigate a magic book. They found a spell within that book which, upon a person uttering the latin words 'Stultus Pulchram' transformed them into a bimbo. All four of them wound up saying the magic words - and thus turned themselves into ditzy horny idiots with a particularly exotic fashion sense.


So first up: Asuna, who is wearing jean booty shorts, a hot pink tanktop, and she's got a figure which was, in the original chapter, compared to Jessica Rabbit.

Next was Haruna who, appropriately with the Jessica Rabbit comparison for Asuna, wound up in a bunnysuit.

Next, Yue, who was wearing a light blue dress with a deep neckline. She looked like she was ready to party - but not so much as Nodoka, who was wearing a rather short frilly skirt and a violet top sans shoulders.


Alright? That's where we started from. Where next?


Konoka arrived home. Got tricked into reading out the spell in the middle of a bunch of other nonsense. Then wound up as a bimbo wearing a diamond cut dress, which really did a good job of hugging her body. And with Konoka got, that made it almost trivial to get Setsuna as well. Her skirt was about half the length it normally was, and her top became a rrather revealing tube top wrapped around a large pair of breasts.


This led into Kazumi saying the spell next, and becoming a bimbo journalist type, hellbent on spreading the news. While wearing a pink and white pencil skirt, alongside a matching strapless tube top with a boob window.


Next on the chopping block... Um... Bimbo block? The alliteration is nice but it doesn't quite sound right... Oh, whatever! The point is, Ayaka was the next target. The class president wound up in a dazzling red dress with a big old slit right up the side which showed off her hot bimbo leg.


Chizuru and Natsume stumbled upon the group right after that, and Natsume was a dummy that went and said the spell despite Chizuru's attempts to not let her. Which resulted in Chizuru internally deciding to make threats involving leaks. As for what she was wearing, it was described like this, and honestly a new piece of text could not make it any better:


"Her proportions rapidly matching the other three almost exactly, and was coupled with a slinky orange/red dress ensemble, a top and a skirt made of the same gleaming material.


The skirt? Pretty ordinary, aside from the material. The top? Borderline obscene. Oh, how to put it...? You've seen that optical illusion where it's either a jar or two people about to kiss? The neckline of this outfit sort of reminded Chizuru of that. What was it more literally? Imagine a strap of cloth wrapping around the back of her neck, and then flowing down to cover her heaving bosom, combining just underneath them and wrapping around the back and back up to keep it on her body. Now imagine that the neckline was lower and more revealing than you originally thought of. No, no. More than that. Still more... There we go, perfect. Now you've got it in mind.


It was glamorous, it was extremely showy, and under ordinary conditions Chizuru might even be happy that Natsumi was coming out of her shell. Except for the fact that the shell was actually the clothes on her back. Chizuru was also certain that Natsumi did not have that many freckles before. Certainly not on her chest at least, as there was a healthy smattering of the tiny dots along her cleavage to match the ones on her face. She suspected if that skirt were to be lifted up there'd be a similar pattern on her backside."


A bit more detail there, but you can probably tell why that was shared. It's the little things that make it work, and that's not so easy to replicate, you know?


Anyway, Chizuru fell shortly after that by talking to herself without watching what she was saying. She then entered a game of twister, and hasn't really been in the story all that much since. She was wearing a red tube top and snug black shorts, and particular mention was made of her breasts. Which makes sense - she was already the biggest in the class, so it's only fair that remain the case even when everyone is bimbo'd up!


Up until this point we'd vaguely followed the design of the original 3D comic this story was based upon. Which seems fair enough, right? Right! Well, there was a deviation here: Ako, when she turned, was made rather bottom heavy. No, that's not the deviation. Instead, the deviation is that she was wearing a sexy nurse's outfit.


After Ako was acquired, the girls decided to go on a little corruption spree by splitting up and picking off targets. This went about as well as you could expect given that they were both extremely horny and all very sexy and also they were all extremely bisexual right now. 


Anyway, Sayo was soon corrupted as well. She'd found out what was happening, bless her, and tried to protect Ku Fei from being corrupted by Kazumi - only to wind up accidentally getting corrupted while trying to lead Kazumi straight to Evangeline. Tricky bimbos, aren't they? Anyway, she wound up drifting around in a nightgown having all sorts of fun with Kazumi, by making use of her own ghostly powers and Kazumi's pactio.


They encountered Mana, who didn't talk much. She seemed to assume that Kazumi was goofing around and left her to her own devices. That is, until she happened to witness Sayo transform at a distance, and decided that she'd need to take action. She hasn't done anything yet, bear in mind~


Meanwhile, Asuna, Ayaka and Haruna noticed that Ku Fei was not a bimbo yet, so they picked up on Kazumi's slack and (eventually) got her to say the words - though the experience was quite exhausting for the three of them due to her general personality and exuberance. Ku Fei wound up wearing a Chinese dress, and looks as cute as a button and as hot as lava.


At the same time this is where Sayo and Kazumi were having their fun, with Sayo subconsciously affecting various normal girls by doing erotic dances right in front of them, where they were only able to notice her on a purely unconscious level. Pretty sinister, that!


Back to Ku Fei! She'd spotted the Strolling Club heading into the library on their regular stroll. She eventually found them within that winding labyrinth - but Kaede immediately clocked that something was up and sent the twins off to find someone smart and experienced enough to deal with the situation while she kept Ku Fei busy.


Alas, the twins are not the best at staying focused on a task and wound up testing it with Yuna. Which succeeded a little too well, for the girl wound up standing there with much longer legs and a cuter butt, while wearing some snug cutoff shorts and a pink and white checkered tanktop. While the twins decided they needed to panic and get the hell out of there, Yuna was already scheming to dumb them down.


Back in the library, Ku Fei had worked out that Kaede was trying to distract her, so Kaede tried to test it out using shadow clones - which wound up being bimbofied too when they said the words.


Meanwhile, Ayaka, Asuna and Haruna recovered from their fun time with Ku Fei due to bimbo stamina - and then decided that Chisame was the next logical target. They arrived at her room. They took one look at her and 'noped' them harder than Jake did in that one Adventure Time episode. You know the one. Hard to blame Chisame really, she has no patience for this bullshit at the best of times.


They got into her room anyway and got her to say the words, because she was so frustrated she just wanted them to piss off already... and then found herself wearing some sort of weird cyberpunk sexy getup.


Cue a chapter that amounts to "and then they fuck", go read it if you want the details, we're doing a plot summary here. The only thing that matters for plot purposes is that they decided to go find someone to corrupt at the very end.


It is a very sexy chapter though. So no, really go read it.


And our most recent chapter: Makie got corrupted by Yue, Ako, and Nodoka, and now she's wearing snug jean shorts and a pink tube top - and that's where we left off.


Phew, that was quite a lot to go through, but we're all up to date now! Let's return to where we left off, shall we?


No comments:

Post a Comment