Sunday, 22 February 2026

Story: Succumilf

 

As a writer, there are times where you look at what you've written, then stare at it for a moment considering its meaning and implication, then let loose a weary sigh. Highlight the text, hit delete, and start again. That happened here, while writing this little update. You see, the very first phrase in that original attempt had been 'This was getting silly'.


Getting. <i>Getting</i> silly. That was completely the wrong tense. This had been silly for quite a while already, and not only was your humble author aware of it, but so too was Mayako, as she was suddenly dodging the fists coming her way from the hero she was meant to seduce.


Worse yet, it was a thought that Mayako had already somewhat expressed at the end of the previous update. 'Getting out of hand' vs 'it had gotten out of hand a long time ago'. Hardly treading new ground with that start to this, huh?


Did that seem like a worthless aside? Did it feel like padding to get to the main point? Welcome to the wonderful world of anime filler. Pleasure to have you. Now, if this were a 'main arc', and Kenshiro were to fight Mayako, then it would be a much bigger deal. It would be a moment full of taut emotional beats, as Kenshiro demanded to know what had driven her to this point, while Mayako was desperately on the back foot trying to calm him down, there would be accusations, recriminations, plot points left dangling for years finally coming to a head...


But not here. This was filler. Merely filler. It couldn't possibly have any bearing on the -


"Was my seduction attempt really that clumsy and obvious?" Mayako asked while ducking both a flying fist, and also the shockwave accompanying it. "I mean, really now, you don't want a piece of this?"


"I respect my boss too much as a woman, and will not engage in office romance!" Kenshiro snarled. "The power dynamic of such a situation is far too unhealthy, and a real man should maintain healthy relationship boundaries wherever possible!"


Do note that every second syllable was punctuated with a blow that would have stopped a herd of elephants in its tracks. From the impact? Or from how freaking cool the blow looked? The answer is yes. In the case of our succubus, she was getting really, really wet right now from how fucking awesome the destined hero was turning out to be. Even if her mission wasn't to seduce him, at this point... at this point she really, really wanted to get on top of him and sit on his face as a matter of principle. Fuck the power dynamic, she needs to get laid! Pronto!


The thing was, she needed to calm his butt down pronto! But how? How could she go about doing that?


"Kenshiro! Allow me!" Sora called out, tossing something over to the hero. He caught it in his teeth while doing a backflip. "That's a purification arrow! If you hit her with it, then it will drive the succubus out of her body!"


Ding! That's it! Perfect! Pretend to be exorcised, and then go about her business as per usual! Pretend that she didn't remember any of this, but conveniently remember that Kenshiro rescued her, show support for his after work activities, maybe slowly 'realise' that she had latent succubus powers that she could use to help him, and then use that as a means to seduce him over the longer term!


Excellent plan. Absolutely flawless. With only one key issue. How to be hit by the purification arrow without actually getting purified? Decisions,decisions... Let's try this approach, shall we?


"Kukuku~" Mayako cackled. "I have a better idea. How about this? Hero... Toss aside that tawdry tool of the light, or I shall sever the carotid artery of this woman? I shall be able to find a new host - but she will bleed out in front of you~"


"Throw it away?" Kenshiro tsked, while Mayako held an extended fingernail up to her own neck. "I know how this works. I give in to your hostage demands once, and then -"


"And for the second half of my deal~" Mayako continued. "A simple kiss, and then I'll leave her body. Forever~"


"Is that so?" Kenshiro asked, his eyes narrowing onto her. "I get it. Carrot and the stick approach to get what you really want. Huh? Is that it? You trying to play me like a fiddle?"


He held out the arrow - and then tossed it away. Mayako lowered her finger from her neck... And then the arrow managed to bounce off a chair, then off the wall, and struck her right in the back! At which point, she fell to the ground writhing and wriggling, screaming her fool head off - 


Before gently sitting up, blinking, looking around her, taking it all in... and then fainting right away onto the floor.


"Mayako!" Sora gasped, rushing to her side before anyone else. "Oh no, I do hope you're alright! Please, say something!"


Dammit Sora you're ruining the moment! Now, this part probably isn't that much of a surprise to those of you paying attention, but all the same - this was actually all according to plan. Yes, really and truly. This was her plan. And it was a really smart plan, thank you very much!


Consider: What's the most awesome thing that Kenshiro could have done in that situation? Answer: follow the letter of what Mayako said she wanted. Throw away the arrow. From there it was simple calculus and angles. Throw the arrow away from her in a way that makes it bounce right into her back. From there, all that she had to do was hold this pear in place behind herself using her wings, and - presto. The arrow pierces the flesh of the fruit, she fakes being got and lets the pear hold the arrow in place behind her. It was the perfect -


"Hold on, let's make sure," Sora said. "Succubi are known to be sneaky, so -"


Huh? Before Mayako could stop her, Sora had jabbed something into her thigh and - Ohhhh nooooo, something really bad was happening! Her power was leaving her, evaporating out of her body like a deflating balloon! Her power... the power she'd only recently reawakened to again after meeting the hero after all this time. It was - It was -!


There was a dark ominous shadow suddenly looming over the group. Soon enough, it coalesced into the form of a shapely woman with very familiar features. Mayako ought to know. She'd seen it in the mirror often enough. A mature woman with healthy curves. The specifics were indistinct, but there could be no doubt that it was her!


"You got away this time, he~ero~" the shadowy version of her cooed, then blew a kiss towards him that Kenshiro himself ducked away from as if he was ducking a bullet. "But next time... Next time you'll get lucky~ I promise you won't regret it when you lose, kukuku!"



And then, she scattered, her evil laugh on the wind, while Mayako stared up in utter disbelief. She couldn't feel it. Couldn't feel her power at all inside her anymore.


All she could do for now was cling to Sora and let out deep racking sobs over what she'd lost, while Sora and the rest of them obviously misunderstood her situation. How was she supposed to seduce the hero now?!


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The amount of sex that Saji has had in the last month alone dwarfs what most men manage in a lifetime. Hardly surprising, right? He's a half incubus, and on top of that he's not actually consciously aware of the powers he's using - which gives him an air of a genuine catch. The girls he bangs all know it's a one time deal, maybe he'll give them another ride if he likes them enough - and they're fine with that.


It's absolutely absurd really, how much tail he could catch at the drop of a hat. His abilities were so potent that he'd even managed to snare a normally uptight Angel of Love, and turned her into a thirsty bitch without even trying. In truth, the two of them were kind of victims of the other's latent powers - for she had fallen head over heels in lust with him, telling herself that it was love, while he had genuinely fallen for her.


This Esme girl that Ai had introduced him to was exactly the sort he'd normally bring back home and bend over his desk. But that's the thing. He wasn't like that anymore. The one and only woman he wanted to be with from now on was Ai-


"Can you do me a little favour?" Ai asked, while looking him dead in the eyes. "I need you to knock her up for me~"


Ding! That's all it took. A switch was flipped in his brain. All of a sudden, he was looking this other girl up and down in the way that he used to look at other girls, and he recognised right away that they were in the same boat.


Namely, that they were about to have some amazing sex, but only because Ai asked them to.


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